Tuesday, 25 February 2025

A Trial Inhumation by Kate Twitchin, a large brandy

By Kate Twitchin 

 a large brandy

 

“It is you, isn’t it?”

Damn, I thought these dark glasses and this hideous hat were a good disguise.

“I’d know you anywhere, Angela…”

“Keep your voice down.”

I don’t understand. I saw him bury you.”

The most terrifying three hours of my life, I can tell you. Edgar Allen Poe didnt know the half of it.”

Three hours?”

I told him two hours, max. Typical of him to lose track of time.”

Youre saying he buried you alive?”

Obviously.”

But…”

Wait a sec, how come you saw him bury me?”

What?”

It was dark, it was a secret, and it was a good way off the forest track.”

Why?

We could hardly do it in my back garden with nosy old Mrs. Perkins next door.”

I mean, why did he bury you alive?”

Sales, darling, sales. I thought if I mysteriously disappeared for a bit…”

Christ! Couldnt you have checked into a spa Hotel in Harrogate under an assumed name?”

That was my first idea, of course, but then I thought, I can kill two birds with one stone here.”

Two birds?”

Research, darling, research. For my next novel. Im going down the Romantic Gothic Horror route.”

You let him bury you alive for research?”

I know, genius isnt it?

Completely mental is what it is.”

Hang on. You didnt answer my question. How come you saw him bury me?”

Let’s just say, you’re not the only one doing research.”

What? He’s got some explaining to do. Have you got your car?”

Tescos car park.

OK. Meet me at mine."

With that, Angela Goodbody put her head down and scuttled off in the direction of the Long Stay Car Park.

 

As I made my way through the crowds of Saturday shoppers, I pulled out my phone and called Toby.

Sarah?

I just saw our mutual friend. Alive.”

What?”

She told me everything.”

Everything?”

You buried her alive, for Christs sake.”

Dont talk rubbish. Shes dead. You were there. You saw me bury her.”

Not quite. I was keeping lookout by the car, remember?”

But you saw me dig the grave, saw the coffin I made out of…”

Lengths of timber left over from my decking, yes, yes, I saw all that but I didnt see you physically bury her. All I saw was you disappearing into the woods, dragging her corpse wrapped in an old carpet.”

Dead body, old carpet, whats the difference? You saw what you wanted to see.”

You were supposed to kill her, Toby. Toby?” He’d rung off, the pillock.

 

He hadnt murdered her. I knew I should be relieved but right then I was confused, angry, and fearful. Mostly fearful, for my debut novel. Everything about that night: the owls screeching and foxes barking as blue-black clouds scudded across the moon; the smell of leaf mould underfoot and the distant, muffled sound of Tobys shovel as he filled in the grave. It was all there, in my opening chapter.

The police procedural bits were coming along nicely too, thanks to the invaluable experience of being questioned by a very hostile police officer in a grim interview room. Being caught up in a media frenzy was an eye-opener as well. When did I last see my client, one-time popular novelist Angela Goodbody? Is she dead or alive? In light of her recent flops, can suicide be ruled out? Relentless speculation, but it was worth it. As her agent of two decades, I was enjoying seeing sales of her tedious books soar and my percentage of the cash rolling in, minus what I’d agreed to pay Toby. But what about my book? I needed the constant dread of being found out, the stress of all the lies, being the prime suspect of foul play, to make my novel real. How many crime writers truly know how it feels to have killed someone…or at least aided and abetted in a real murder?

 

As I pulled up outside Angelas cottage, it was Toby who yanked open the front door.

“Get in, quick!”

Bloody hell, Toby, whats going on?”

I can explain.”

Shes still alive, damn it.”

You didnt seriously think I was going to kill her, did you?”

Its what we agreed, for my book.”

Youre nuts,” he was saying as, behind him, the door to Angela's study opened and there she was, smiling, and very full of life.

Talking of nutters,” Toby muttered.

Sarah, lovely to see you again. Sorry I had to dash off but if you could recognise me then so might others. I want to stay disappeared for a bit longer, I mean, have you seen what its done for my sales?”

Enough to buy a bigger hat?”

Going shopping was a bit reckless but I was going stir-crazy.”

Angela, I…”

Hows your book coming along?”

You know about that?”

Toby just told me. Im dying to read it, no pun intended. Anyway, now youre here, pop your literary agents hat on and have a read of my prologue.”

She led me to her desk where a document was open on the computer screen.

 

Working title: A Trial Inhumation.

I began to read…

 

My head is throbbing; my whole body aches and Im very, very cold, and thirsty, so thirsty. I’ve never known such utter darkness and the only sound is my blood pounding in my ears. I try to sit up but my forehead whacks against something hard. I start to bend my knees but they hit the same hard surface. Where am I? Have I been asleep, or unconscious? I feel panic rising as I search for clues. My breath is ragged, my heart racing, as I explore the space around me. There are only a couple of inches between me and the walls of my…my…coffin. Im in a coffin. Im in a coffin. I cant breathe. I’m in a coffin. I’m in a coffin. Im screaming, yelling, hammering on the sides...

 

About the Author

Retired Administrator Kate is enjoying sitting around and making things up. She’s had poems and a short story published by The People’s Friend; Flash Fiction in Secret Attic, Early Works Press and Briefly Write; and short stories published by Writers’ Forum, WriteTime and Scribble, and shortlisted in various competitions.

 

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