In the watered-down version of you, you are merely an acquaintance not the love from my youth. In this version, you are smaller with those thin hands that keep slipping through mine. And, yes, you still speak with a bit of a southern accent, but it’s not smooth or gentle. This voice does not grasp me at once, wrapping me in the light that was you. Those sweetheart-baby doll-honey words are not lingering in the air. No, for you aren’t charming or inviting, just lost. I think of you as lost.
And that day, that one day, on the 8th of July, when I found you on the street “Excuse me, oh,” you say, a sweep of your finger on my skin, “My, it’s you.”
I was thinking of your touch then, still, your touch has a slight tingle, but I tell myself there is no electricity. No shock really or heat that rises over the goose-bump flesh. And you can’t speak to me anymore with those gray-green eyes, holding me inside. For today, finally, on this day I can see the black ones, those black eyes, black-black.
Look at you now, Ta-da, you are slim, weak, but my tall glass of water is full. I diluted you. I drank it. Sure, I cheated with a trick but then so, did you? You cheated me and yourself didn’t you? You and your edginess, all the slipping-slipping away, glassy eyed, with the pipe, those needles, your ruins. See, in this watered-down version of you, come look, closer, I swallowed you, hard. The memories go down-down.
It doesn’t burn completely.
About the author
Angela Carlton’s fiction has been published in Every Writer, Everyday Fiction, Pedestal Magazine, 6S, 50 Word Stories, Spillwords Press, The Dribble Drabble Review and Friday Flash Fiction. In 2022, "A Jigsaw Life," a collection of stories was released. In 2023, her story “Swallowed,” was nominated for the Pushcart Prize.
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