Thursday, 3 April 2025

A Bit of Preloved by Paula R C Readman, icy coffee

 Preloved! The word screamed at me from across the road as a banner fluttered above the window of a vintage clothing shop opposite to where I sat drinking coffee— the bitterness of the flat white only added to the sour taste in my mouth. I couldn’t believe the situation I was in after five wonderful years of marriage.

Preloved!

After five years of a loving relationship, I discovered I was married to a screaming banshee. A recent business trip had me away from home much longer than I expected, and it turned out to be far more difficult than I hoped as I searched for a good supplier to restock my shop. The moment I arrived home, an explosion of verbal abuse instead of a happy wife confronted me; it broke my heart, but no amount of sweet-talking could pacify Sabrina.

‘You are a liar and a cheat, Jethro! I’m tired of waiting at home while you fly off around the world. Oh, you say you have to travel for business reasons, but I’m not as dumb as you think I am. Well, enough is enough. I will wait no more. I want out.’

And, just like that, she left.

Preloved!

A marriage needs trust to survive. Hadn’t I video-called her every night to let her know how much I loved her while I sat eating fast food in the bedroom of the bed and breakfast accommodation?

The sun glinted off my wedding ring as I reached for my coffee cup— a reminder that, at least I had something worth selling. After knowing Sabrina for less than six months, I foolishly told my friends I was in love and I wanted to marry her. They said love is blind and quoted the adage: Marry in haste, repent at leisure. Blinded to the point of distraction by Sabrina’s beauty, I failed to see her faults and proved my friends were right.

The rings had cost a small fortune, along with the wedding. Our wedding day had been all about what Sabrina wanted, which should’ve been a red flag to me. Well, at least, the house had been what I wanted; I bought it before I met Sabrina. Still, she had walked away with it, along with the car and our savings— no, the savings that I had put aside to expand the business and to support our dreams. I tugged the ring off my finger and slipped it into my pocket.

A gush of wind raced down the alley, rattling the cables holding up the banner that read, ‘Fifty percent off all preloved clothes.’

‘If only the judge had awarded my now ex just fifty percent of everything, I wouldn’t have such a sour taste left in my mouth,’ I muttered into my coffee cup.

After leaving the courthouse alone, I hurried across the road seeking somewhere to sit and contemplate the worst morning of my life and to escape the gazes and bitter comments from my wife’s entourage.

Preloved!

The fluttering banner outside a vintage shop kept distracting me from my thoughts. Sighing, I wondered why I had wasted so much time and energy trying to keep Sabrina happy rather than focusing on what would make us both happy. Not once did she offer to find a job or help me build the business. For a woman who loved spending a fortune on clothes, with money she hadn’t earned— I was surprised when she showed no interest in my line of work.

Preloved!

Sabrina always said she wouldn’t be seen dead wearing someone else’s cast off and would only wear branded clothing. Lucky for me, she didn’t know how much my business turnover was, because in her eyes, it was as worthless as a charity shop to her. Having made a decision, I set my cold coffee down and stood. Now that I'm preloved, it's the perfect time to sell my vintage clothing business, and make a fresh start.

About the author 

 

Paula R. C. Readman is a prolific writer and has penned six books and over a hundred short stories. She lives in an Essex village with her husband, Russell. Blog: https://colourswordspaper.blog or just Google Paula R C Readman, and something’s bound to pop up. 

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Wednesday, 2 April 2025

Delphine by Liz Cox, kir royale

 Delphine drew the ecru lace curtain away from the window, so she could watch him as he strode down the boulevard. He had a spring in his step and wore his hat at the jaunty angle she loved so much. It was four o’clock in the afternoon and she accepted he had to leave. She accepted many things. She knew he lived in the better part of the city, in an elegant apartment with a wrought iron balcony and heavy draped curtains overlooking the Champs Elysées. She knew because she had followed him. She closed her eyes to shut out the memory of him strolling in the park with his beautiful wife Lisette and two charming children. She dropped the curtain and sighed, pulling the rose silk peignoir he had bought for her across her body.

She had met Jean-Paul one stormy November evening in her brother’s restaurant where she was a cashier. He had doffed his elegant hat and then handed it to her to place in the cloakroom along with his cashmere overcoat. His smile lit his deep brown eyes from within. She smiled as she remembered stroking the soft material as she hung his coat carefully on a hanger. He was with a group of male friends and as they ate and drank, he kept looking over at her and smiling. She had blushed at the time and cast her eyes down to her ledger. When the party left, as he collected his coat and hat from the waitress, he had made a bow to her where she sat behind the office window. The window was mullioned and distorted his features making his smile crooked. She saw the men gathered outside the restaurant shouting their goodbyes, but his face was obscured by the misted gold script on the window advertising Le Pichet d’Or.

Roland, her brother, had left her to close that night, as her sister-in-law was unwell. The rain was lashing down, and the street was awash. She thought she detected one or two early snowflakes in the light of the streetlamp. Struggling with her umbrella, she pulled down the blinds and locked the door. She looked over her shoulder, eyes sharp, on the lookout for danger. A figure stepped out of the shadows. Delphine flattened herself against the damp wall and froze. It was midnight, not the time or place for a woman to be out on her own in this quarter of Paris.

‘What do you want? She cried. ‘I have no money. Go away before I call for the gendarme.’ 

He stepped out of the alley and placed himself under the gas lamp, so she could see his face. She breathed a tentative sigh of relief but still dug her fingernails into the brickwork. She was aware that she could be in danger. He tipped his homburg, and as he did so, she recognised the customer who had smiled at her throughout the evening.

‘I’m sorry,’ he said, ‘I didn’t mean to frighten you. I just wanted to talk to you.’

Delphine wiped her hands on her serviceable navy winter coat then pulled her worn-out hat over her ears against the cold and wet. She caught their reflection in the window of the boulangerie across the road. A drab young woman in an old-fashioned hat standing next to a tall exquisitely dressed man with dark wet hair curling over his collar. She turned away, unable to acknowledge the picture they made.

‘I’m sorry but I must go home, it’s getting late,’ she whispered. He caught her hand as she began to walk down the wet pavement. She tried to twist from his grip.

Liz writes short stories and poetry and is just finishing her first novel. She lives in North Yorkshire and at the time of writing is looking out at the sheep and their new lambs in the field behind her house.

‘Let go! I tell you, let go!’ She scoured the street hoping to see a gendarme or at least another human being as she tried to shake herself free.

He dropped his hand and stood there meekly before her in the street, as the rain soaked into his overcoat and down his neck.

‘Don’t go. Please come and have a drink with me,’ he pleaded. ‘Come out of this weather, I know a small bar around the corner which will still be open.’ He gently took her elbow.

Delphine did not know why she was allowing this man to propel her along against her wishes. She dragged her feet along the pavement. She had encountered countless men like this one, young, wealthy, out for a good time in her poor arrondissement before going back to their wealthy families. Men who picked up women and discarded them on a whim. But something about this man was compelling.

She hesitated, as he pushed open the door. People knew her in this area, what would her brother think? She had a reputation to uphold. She was known for her morality in this part of the city where women would do anything to survive.

‘No, I cannot,’ she said firmly. ‘I’m sorry but I must go home.’ 

He released her arm and bowed.

‘I really would like to get to know you. Can we meet somewhere in the daylight? Tomorrow perhaps? I don’t want to cause you any harm.’

The soft golden light through the window of the bar illuminated his features. Delphine thought him handsome in a coarse kind of way which belied his obvious wealth. His eyes smiled down at her as they stood under a streetlight, a beam fractured into a million shards by the persistent rain.

‘I will meet you tomorrow morning at 10 by the Notre Dame. I will wait for you there. I will be at the market.’ Delphine turned and hurried away leaving the young man standing in the street.

When she reached the safety of her apartment, she leaned against the door, shutting out the night. What had she done? Secretly, she realised that something was carrying her along a trajectory out of her control. She could just not go tomorrow, but she knew she would. She went to her window and looked out at the dark and dismal night. Had he followed her? There was a movement on the corner of the street, and she craned her neck to see what it was. She even opened the window. It was only two tom cats fighting over the overflowing rubbish bin from the nearby café.

Next morning when she rose, the sun was streaming through the tiny square windowpanes making fleeting patterns around her room. It was sunny. She would go to the market. Or would she? As if in a dream, she washed, splashing the chilly water from the jug to the basin. She pulled on her clothes, trying to rub a dirty mark off her best dress. It was already 9.30, if she were going, she would have to leave now.

He was there when she arrived, examining the caged birds in the market. Hiding behind a stall so he wouldn’t see her, she watched him. He was looking at his watch, raising it on its ornate gold chain every few seconds, then dropping it back into his waistcoat pocket. She checked her appearance in the bright café window opposite, smoothing down her skirt and tucking a stray curl under her hat. He had discarded the coat from last night and was wearing a smart check suit and carried a cane with what looked like a silver hound’s head on the top. She looked again at her own reflection. Now was the time to turn back.

He turned around and saw her. A huge smile broke out on his face, and he hurried towards her.

‘You came,’ he said, catching her hands in his.

She freed her hands and stepped back from him.

‘I’m sorry. I’m too eager to see you.’ He fell in beside her as she began to walk towards the cathedral.

‘My name is Jean-Paul,’ he said, ‘Will you tell me yours? I already know your brother is Roland.’

‘I’m Delphine,’ she replied.

They walked along in silence through the heavy oak door and into the cool interior of the church. Delphine looked up at the magnificent Rose window just as the sun streamed through illuminating them in a strange blue glow. She genuflected to the altar and slipped into a pew at the back of the building. Jean-Paul followed her.

They sat gazing at the beautiful displays of white lilies illuminated by the soft candlelight of the wall sconces. This time when Jean-Paul reached for her hand she did not withdraw it. She had made her decision for good or ill.

 

She dropped the curtain across the window and turned back into the room. The fire still glowed softly in the grate and as she cleared away the wine glasses from the table the cutglass sparkled like diamonds, but with a red stain. She loved her Jean-Paul and although difficult, she would never regret her decision. 

 

About the author 

Liz writes short stories and poetry and is just finishing her first novel. She lives in North Yorkshire and at the time of writing is looking out at the sheep and their new lambs in the field behind her house

 

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Tuesday, 1 April 2025

Forgiveness by Barry Garelick, cappucino

In the fall of 1970, during my senior year at the University of Michigan, I convinced myself that I would have a better chance being a writer than a mathematician. I dropped out and figured I would work at any job I could get to support myself. The only job I could get was unloading telephone books from a truck into the cars of people who were to deliver them. The job was to last three days—I quit after the first. During that first day, around the time when my arms became like rubber and I could hardly even lift one phone book, I had a flash of insight and decided to return to school and get my degree. Then I would become a writer.

In the summer of 1971, after taking my last math final, I vowed to never set foot in another math classroom in my life, telling myself that if I ever did I would puke. That fall, I told my parents I was moving to San Francisco. I had made it clear I wasn’t going back to school for a masters. “What are your plans?” my father asked.

“I just told you”

“What about a job?” he asked.

“I’ll find work,” was my reply. I explained that my intent was to work at whatever, so I could write at night and make it as a writer. This seemed as plausible and realistic as anything else I could be doing or that anyone else was doing.

“But what are your plans?” he asked.

“Those are my plans,” I said.

At that time it looked like the war in Viet Nam would never end and it seemed that countercultural values would stay forever. The war did end eventually and countercultural values seemed to fall by the wayside when the majority of the counterculture that wasn’t drafted went to grad school. And when they entered the work force, the final death knell was struck.

Over the course of the next thirty plus years, the world was to change many more times, and I along with it. Eventually I made my peace with the mathematics I thought I had left behind. Ironically my start on this journey back came about through a girl I had left behind—a dark haired girl with whom I kept up a correspondence and occasional passionate visit for two years after I had left school. She got accepted to graduate school at Stanford and moved out to the west coast. It took all of about two weeks for us to discover there wasn’t much behind our romance and we broke up—or at least I thought we had.  She called me one morning, very sad about the break-up and asked me to please come to a housewarming party she and her housemates were throwing in Palo Alto. She was crying, so I said yes.

The party was rather dull; the handful of people who showed up camped out in private spaces within the party boundaries and avoided talking with one another. In the meantime, I was dedicated to stay broken up with my ex-girlfriend which became evident to her when all the guests had gone and I asked “Where am I going to sleep?”

She seemed taken aback by this while at the same time pretending to take it in stride. She disappeared for five minutes and when she came back, she told me I could sleep in one of her housemates’ room which was the only one that had two beds in it.

I was alone for a few minutes in her housemate’s room relieved at how things had worked out. “That was easier than I expected,” I thought as I stood, clad in my boxer shorts, in front of a large bookcase. I caught sight of the book “Men of Mathematics” by Eric Temple Bell. Bell was a mathematician who had written a number of books for lay people. On the front inside cover was an inscription that started “To my darling granddaughter…” and was signed “Eric Temple Bell”.

At that point, the woman who belonged to the room walked in. She was surprised not only to see someone she only knew for a few hours standing in his underwear, but who asked her with wide-eyed astonishment: “Your grandfather was Eric Temple Bell?”

“Yes,” she said, and dashed out.

I have no idea what happened next but imagine that there were a few words exchanged between Bell’s granddaughter and my ex-girlfriend, and that whatever was said was not very pretty. Given her reaction at seeing me, I surmised that the arrangement hadn’t been explained to her—or at least not very fully. The granddaughter came back in, not looking very happy and told me “You can sleep in that bed,” pointing to the one I was standing next to. “And don’t get any wise ideas.”

The next morning I had breakfast with the rather somber group of housemates. They weren’t a very happy bunch to begin with, I had been told. Bell’s granddaughter wouldn’t look my way. I found out later that on top of everything else, my snoring kept her awake.  Being resolute in my blindness of her hatred of me, I asked “So what was your grandfather like?”

She was about to eat a spoonful of corn flakes but instead put her spoon down on the table with a loud thunk. She glared at me and said “He was an absolute jerk. He wouldn’t give my father the time of day his whole life, and he didn’t have time for any of us.”

I imagine that her statement made a lot more sense to me than the others at the table, since her description matched the general population of the University of Michigan Math Department. Not that they were bad people, but math professors at that time generally held undergrads on a spectrum of little regard at one end to non-existent at the other.

As an example, my Advanced Calculus professor was hired directly from Poland and although a brilliant man, spoke so very little English that his lectures were impossible to follow. I complained to the head of the math department who offered an apology in the form of “This man is so brilliant, he’ll have the chair in mathematics in a few years. Unfortunately we were in such a hurry to grab him that we neglected to notice that he didn’t speak English.” How one escapes from noticing this little detail is indeed puzzling, and I wasn’t too pleased with this explanation.

I replied that with his lectures so incomprehensible, I would be better off just reading the book rather than paying tuition and taking a class. His response: “This sounds like a wonderful opportunity for you to learn.” For those of you who know a bit about upper level math courses, the textbook was “Advanced Calculus” by R. Creighton Buck, which doesn’t lend itself to do-it-yourselfers.

I did have a friend, however—a very nice professor who had taught my class in Introduction to Real Analysis. I told him I was having problems, and he said there was a more straightforward advanced calculus course, for engineers rather than math majors. He was of the opinion that “It’s all bologna no matter how you slice it” and told me he’d put in a good word for me to be able to take the engineering-based course in lieu of the one I was in. A few days later he told me that the answer from the math department was “No.” The advanced calculus course I was in was for math majors and if I was to major in math, that was the course I was to take, no ifs, ands or buts.

Over the years since my experience as an unwelcome guest in the granddaughter’s  bedroom, I have realized that her harsh words about her grandfather made me aware of an allegiance to the subject that I didn’t know I had. I’ve also realized that she was being loyal to her father who she felt had been slighted and ignored. I too recognized my loyalty to my father, and eventually made my peace with him as well.  

I recall a visit with him about a year before he passed away. He was very old and his health was failing along with his memory. We were many years away from the conflicts and arguments that I faced when I left home after finishing college which is why, I suppose, I was amused when he said “So what are you doing these days? What are your plans?”

I told him I was planning to teach math when I retire. “I always thought you’d wind up as a writer,” he said, his mind dwelling on my rebellious days when I turned my back on math and school in general. I explained as well as I could my interest in trying to help young kids with math and how I had over the years rejuvenated my interest in the subject. Always wanting to see his kids as great he said “You mean all these years you were a mathematical genius?”

No, I’m afraid I can’t make that claim. I just like the subject. The amazement I felt at the age of seven when realizing that counting to one hundred twice is the same as counting to two hundred once was no less than when as a sophomore in college I discovered I could prove that a set of mutually non-intersecting discs in a plane is countable. Life with my father and his inconsistencies and eruption of temper was often difficult. With his passing, I forgave him his inconsistencies.

While I was at it, I also forgave the transgressions of the academic world. Although I have not ascended into the world of true mathematicians, the math world has been kind to me. I remain grateful for it providing me with the refuge that was and is so wonderfully and eternally consistent. 

 

About the author  

Barry Garelick has fiction published in Heimat, Cafe Lit, Ephemeras and Fiction on the Web. His non-fiction pieces have been published in Atlantic, and Education Next. He lives in Morro Bay, California with his wife.

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Monday, 31 March 2025

Ghost of a Husband by Daniel Day, whisky on the rocks

 

It wasn’t an easy decision, but it had to be done – I could see no other way in the end. I had become so sick and tired of the monotony, day after day, week after week, Sunday lunch followed by Monday evening bridge followed by Tuesday afternoon tea and so on and so on, forever and ever. 

And the effort it all took! Retirement was supposed to mean rest from work, but it had turned out to be anything but. 

‘You will get the step ladder out and dust off the curtains before this evening won’t you dear?’ she would say. Heaven forbid that our bridge club guests would look up and notice just how much dust had accumulated on the rail since last week’s visit.

‘You know I can’t do it, not with how I am with heights.’ she would always add.

Then there was the afternoon tea, always at Deborah’s Tea Rooms in town, Tuesdays at precisely two o’clock. 

They knew us by name in there. I hated the condescending tones, the cooing at us like we were infants. The way they would pull chairs out and hold doors open like we were incapable of looking after ourselves.

‘He’ll have the smoked salmon salad,’ she insisted. I hated smoked salmon; I wanted a bacon roll but apparently my cholesterol was very much her business and not my own.

In the end, I just couldn’t stand it. I announced one evening that I was going for a stroll. 

‘You’ll degrease the kitchen backsplash when you get back then?’ she said. ‘You know I can’t bend so far over the counter.’

            I didn’t reply. What would have been the point?

I stepped out into the cold night air and began my sombre march across town. Under the ghostly light of streetlamps, I arrived at the road bridge. It spanned the great river which had flowed through our town since before I was born and would not cease to flow after I was gone. 

I took in a gulp of bitter air like a shot of whisky, climbed trembling up onto the iron railing, and said farewell to the world.

I plunged into pressing darkness. An uneasy weightlessness took me then I knew no more.

That is until I found myself inexplicably standing right back in our kitchen, my soaking wet clothes seeming strangely not to drip on her porcelain floor tiles. 

My skin felt sticky and cold.

There was a newspaper sat on the table. The headline read: Body of Retired Man Found by Fisherman. I reached out to pick it up but found that my hand went straight through both it and the table. 

I quivered in the stark realisation that my plan had been successful. An unnerving dread dripped from a soaked lock of my hair and trickled down to the tip of my nose.

I heard slipper-clad footsteps on the stairs. Hide! The ridiculousness of the thought startled me and I found myself laughing. 

‘Really dear, whatever can be so funny at a time like this?’ 

I was dumbstruck. I spun towards the door to see her standing there, just as she always had been. I stumbled backwards, discovering my legs passed right through the oven door which had been left open. 

‘Do be careful.’ she said. ‘And try not to sit on any of the furniture, you’ll only get it wet.’

‘I won’t.’ I said, indignantly. ‘Anyway, I couldn’t sit on the furniture even if I wanted to.’ 

She sighed. ‘No, I suppose not.’ She looked deeply forlorn. With effort, I contorted the sickening guilt I felt to feel more like pity. 

‘So, you know I’m…’

‘Dead?’ she interrupted, and I felt a jolt in my chest at the word. ‘It would have been difficult not to notice, especially after the police came round.’

I felt sick; this wasn't what I’d wanted at all. I had wanted freedom, release from hard labour, this was so much worse.

‘But you can see me?’ I said. ‘You can hear me, we’re speaking right now aren’t we?’ 

She shuffled forwards, passing right through my body to get to the sink.

‘Yes, I can see you.’ 

‘But how?’ I said, half to myself.

‘Don’t know; suppose you must be haunting me.’ she said. ‘Unfinished business and all that.’

‘But I don’t have any further business, I have nothing more to say.’

‘No.’ she snorted. ‘You said it all when you jumped off that bridge.’ Another jolt in my chest, this time more violent. 

She looked dreadful. Not externally, she was always immaculately put together, but deep in her eyes there lay the cold, bitterness of a woman betrayed.

‘I’m sorry…’ I began, but the empty words withered and died, like the last feeble, flickers of a candle in the overwhelming dark. She finished washing the last of the dishes then passing through my body again, drew out a chair. She picked up the newspaper which covered her face as she read.

‘I suppose you’ll want to know why?’ I said.

‘No,’ she said sharply. ‘It’s quite obvious why – you couldn’t stand to live with me any longer.’ Her bluntness was excruciating. ‘Most people would have just had an affair or something.’ she added.

‘I’d have never done anything like that!’ I defended.

‘And this is so much better is it?’ she said. ‘Why couldn’t you have simple talked to me? You never spoke! Whenever we’d go out you’d sit there, silently squirming, I knew something was wrong. I suspected you were unhappy, so I tried to arrange things for us to do, things we enjoyed!’

‘Well I didn’t enjoy them!’ I snapped. ‘I just wanted to rest for once and have a bloody bacon roll if I felt like it!’ I became suddenly aware how much my words sounded like that of a sulking child.

She tutted then turned a crinkly page, the uneasy quiet illuminating my shame.

‘Well…’ she said, crinkling the edges of the newspaper in her fingers. ‘It’s too late now, now that your'e…’ Another jolt in my chest and my entire body trembled.

‘Can you hear me?’ she said. I found that I couldn’t speak, she called my name.

‘Come back!’ she cried. Her sobs were muffled and distant.

The light in the room was suddenly unbearably bright. I raised my hands to feel tubes coming out of my naked flesh.

‘He’s regaining consciousness.’ another voice said.

‘Come back to me!’ she cried.

 

 

About the author 

 Daniel Day is a writer and musician, living with his wife and two children in West Yorkshire. He writes about ordinary things with an extraordinary twist. He has had short stories published on East of the Web and Cafe Lit. 

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Sunday, 30 March 2025

Sunday Serial: 280 x 70, 56. Colours by Gill James bitter lemon

 Introduction

This collection is a collection of seventy stories, each 280 words. They were inspired by the first picture seen on my Twitter feed on a given day. 

56. Colours 

What to wear? What to wear? Could she say it in colours? A blue jacket. That was a lie. But didn't blue represent lies now? The red rosette said it loud enough, didn't it? She knew her black shirt and black hair set it off well enough. And what of the crucifix? Oh yes, indeed. Red lips pouting to boot. She was arriving.

She would always stand up for the working class. Working class? Those who had to work for their money, who didn't get given it.

Not for her the yellow bellies. Broken promises to the students and this absurd pipe dream of maintaining the status quo. Ye gods. The people had spoken and said what they wanted. 52% of them. (Sort of.) Come on. Get on with it.

She touched her jacket lightly. A pity it was blue. The colour suited her. She could never be blue. Especially with the almighty mess they were making now. The whole caboodle an argument between a couple of public school boys. Shame on them. What were they thinking? Their mothers should talk to them seriously.

"I'd rather get into bed with the Jack Russell. I despise what he stands for with his racism, hatred and division. They'll crucify me for sure. But so be it. The people have spoken; I'm not alone in my party thinking this way."

On cue the young man in the purple beanie jumped up in front of her and cried. "The will of which people? Those who were lied to?  Those who pay taxes here but aren't allowed a voice? Those who've changed their minds? Those who were too young to give their opinion back then? 

About the author 

 Gill James is published by The Red Telephone, Butterfly and Chapeltown. She edits CafeLit and writes for the online community news magazine: Talking About My Generation. She teaches Creative Writing and has an MA in Writing for Children and PhD in Creative and Critical Writing.  
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Saturday, 29 March 2025

Saturday Sample: Crime After Crime, Blood in Summer by Sam Millar, black coffee


 

I held the coffee cup rigid at my mouth as I read the morning’s headline: Murder Case To Be Re-opened. 

 “Tom?” Belinda, my wife, interrupted my thoughts. “You okay?” 

“Heartburn.” 

“You sure?” 

“Yes.” I smiled falsely, returning to the photo in the newspaper, while thinking back to all those years ago… 

 Mid-June, the town in a heat wave. I was skinny dipping in Jackson’s Lake with my two best friends, Paul Fleming and Charlie Redden. The lake could be decep tively still at times, but quite crafty in its nature. Police danger signs were posted everywhere. 

I’d just stepped out of the water when I spotted a fig ure on top of the hill. 

“That looks like Joey Maxwell,” I said, pointing. 

Paul glanced towards the hill. 

“You’re right, Tommy. It’s him.” 

“How many times have we told him he can’t hang with us?” asked Charlie. 

Joey was twelve – two years younger than us – so there was no way we could be seen with a kid. Besides, the horrible episode from last year was still fresh in our minds, and even though it wasn’t Joey’s fault, we no longer felt comfortable when he was anywhere near us. 

 “Joey! What the hell’re you doing!” shouted Paul. Joey didn’t reply, inching slowly into the water. 

“He’s going for a dip, with his clothes on,” said Char lie, grinning. “Go on, Joey! You can do it!”  

Suddenly, we were all chanting, “Joey! Joey! Joey!” 

 Every deliciously fear-charged moment of entertain ment increased, as water moved up to Joey’s neck. 

We began counting out the seconds, daring him to break the all-time record of one minute and ten seconds for staying under the water. “One, two, three…” He was gone. We continued counting in a drum roll. 

“Twenty, twenty-one…” 

 On and on we counted, our voices rising with each fading second. 

“Fifty-nine, sixtyyyyyyyyy! Sixty-one, sixty two…” 

 At seventy, our voices slowly filtered out, leaving a heavy silence. 

 “Someone’s gotta dive in there, see what that he’s up to,” said Paul. “Tommy?” 

“Why me?” 

“You’re the best swimmer.” 

I didn’t want to be part of anything that might have happened under that dirty water, but I had little choice. 

For some inexplicable reason, the water felt colder as my bare feet touched it. Seconds later, I was in, propelling my body downwards in the murky thickness. Visibility became nil as I went deeper. 

But it wasn’t too long before panic began building up inside my burning lungs. I needed to resurface. Then, just as I twisted my body to head upwards, an old wreck of a car mistily came into view. Ghostly green, its smashed windows looked like gaping eyes. I wanted to swim away from it, but its magnetic pull drew me closer. 

That was when I spotted Joey, motionless. He seemed to be gripping the car. 

I went torpedoing forward, reached out and took hold of his arm. He didn’t move, his face expressionless in the godless gloom of watery darkness. 

Quickly grabbing the back of his shirt, I began yank ing as hard as I could. Nothing. His body resisted. I pulled some more on the shirt, but my lungs were on fire. I quickly swam to the surface, empty-handed, gulping on the beautiful taste of air. 

“Get help!” I shouted, before plunging back down. 

Under the water, I tried searching for the wreck, but the water was becoming murkier. I found nothing, other than a forest of thick weeds. I tried swimming through them, but suddenly they began entwining themselves on my legs. It felt like someone trying to hold me down. 

Panicking, I kicked out at the weeds, but their grip became iron. Water began rushing into my mouth. 

No! Not like this! I screamed in my head. Don’t die like this… 

I remember Charlie dragging me back to land, but that was about all I recalled. “He’s… he’s down there, Charley,” I spluttered, coughing up water. 

“Paul’s away to get help. It’ll be okay.” Charlie was lighting a cigarette. I could tell from the way his hands were shaking he understood it was anything but okay. 

By the time an ambulance arrived in tandem with a police jeep, I knew it was too late. Joey was gone. I also knew I was in trouble, as I watched the sheriff emerging from the jeep, rushing towards me. 

“Are you okay, Tommy?” The sheriff quickly bent down beside me. 

“Joey’s down there, Dad.” 

“Don’t worry. We’ll find him,” said Dad, before run ning in the direction of police divers. 

I knew Dad would have more to say to me, later. He didn’t agree with my friendship of Paul, whom he regarded as a future felon. 

It took the divers forty minutes to locate Joey, but two hours to bring his body to the surface. He’d handcuffed himself to the steering wheel of the old wreck – the same handcuffs his father used as a prison guard for years. 

The newspaper headlines suggested Joey’s suicide had been triggered because of a sexual attack on him. They also noted, ominously, that his attacker had never been apprehended, even though police had a suspect but couldn’t arrest him through lack of evidence. 

The papers took a picture of me. They said I was a hero trying to save a drowning pal. 

“That bastard, Not Normal. He killed Joey,” said Paul. 

“Shhhh!” I hissed, looking nervously behind my shoulder. “Only a few people know Not Normal’s a suspect. If my dad finds out I was listening to his phone conversations, I’ll be in for it.” 

Not Normal – Norman Armstrong – acquired the moniker after his name being repeatedly pronounced wrongly by every kid in town, usually when entering the movie house where the creepy loner worked. 

Normal, can you tell us if there’s a cartoon on today? Will the ice-cream woman be working today, Normal? Normal, can you tell me— 

This went on for months, until one night, he had had enough. I’m Norman! he screamed, in utter frustration, making history eternally with the following classic statement: I’m not fucking Normal! 

 “They should shoot the perv,” continued Paul, so serious it scared me. 

“Yea, in the head,” said Charlie. 

“We should make a pact, like they do in the movies,” continued Paul, who loved nothing better than a good murder movie. “Are you game, Tommy?” 

“For what?” 

“Justice for Joey. We take an oath, right here.” He held out his hand and with the other produced a penknife. “A blood oath.” 

“I…” Even though I believed nothing would come of this so-called blood oath, the hairs on the back of my neck suddenly nipped my skin. “Okay…” 

Paul held out his thumb, curving the knife inwards. The skin tore. An inkblot of blood appeared. I would never forget it. Dirty crimson. Like the bloodshot eye of a trapped animal. 

“Here,” said Paul, handing the knife to me, while hold ing his bloody thumb outwards. 

I took the knife, cut. 

“Now you, Charlie,” commanded Paul. 

Charlie cut. 

“Put all our thumbs together,” said Paul. 

We complied. 

“Let the oath of blood brothers and secrecy live with us…” continued Paul, forcing the three thumbs tightly against each other, allowing the blood to mingle. “Forever.” 

For the longest time of my life, I waited to take my thumb away. It felt on fire. 

“Are we finished?” I finally asked. “I’ve got to head home. I’m still under curfew.” 

 “Finished,” said Paul. “Give me time to think out a plan.” 

 There would be no plan, of course, just Paul living out one of his fantasies. 

 

The next day, I met Paul and Charlie at the bottom of my street. “I’ve something I want to show you,” said Paul. 

“What?” 

“You’ll see. Let’s head over to Blackwood.” 

 Blackwood was the large forest area surrounding Jack son’s Lake. 

“This’ll do,” said Paul, thirty minutes later, stopping beside an old uprooted tree badly gone to rot. 

I watched him dropping to his knees, digging at the soil. A few minutes later, he stood, a rag-covered package in his hand. 

“What’s that?” said Charlie. 

Paul peeled the rag away, revealing a gun wrapped protectively in polythene. It stared out at us like a mummified foetus. 

“Whoa! Is it real?” said Charlie. 

“As real as your cock,” said Paul, releasing the gun from the enclosure. “It’s a German Luger.” 

I was less impressed, having seen plenty of guns in my life. By the time I was seven, I had handled my first gun. Yet, there was something different about this gun displayed proudly in Paul’s hands. It sent the dual shivers of fear and weariness up my spine. 

“Where’d you get it?” I asked. 

“My granddad brought it back from the war.” 

This was a new Paul – a Paul with secrets. As friends, we weren’t supposed to have secrets – at least not of this magnitude. 

“Have you fired it?” asked Charlie. 

“Old Mullan’s barn. Almost shot one of his bulls.” “That’s bullshit,” said Charlie, grinning. 

Without warning, Paul cocked the Luger. The sound made me think of someone’s knuckles cracking. Slowly, he brought the gun up to Charlie’s face. 

“Think I’m a bullshitter, Charlie?” 

Both Charlie and I went rigid. Fear spread through me, and everything began to tingle in a very bad way. I could see Paul’s finger tightening on the trigger.  “Paul…” I finally managed to croak, my mouth dry as cotton. 

“Don’t mess with—” 

He pulled the trigger. 

Kraaaaaaaaaaaaaaacckk! 

"You should’ve seen the look on your face, Charlie!” Paul was grinning like a frog. “It wasn’t even loaded.” 

Charlie began retching violently. 

Instinctively, I grabbed the gun from Paul’s grip, and pushed him. He landed firmly on his butt. 

“Are you fucking mad!” I shouted. 

“It… it wasn’t loaded,” he mumbled. 

 Removing the magazine from the Luger’s heel, I could see a bullet nestled on top. I slowly removed the bullet, and held it out. 

“Wasn’t fucking loaded! What’s that?” 

 It was Paul’s turn to look frightened. 

“I thought it was empty…” he mumbled. 

“Never point a gun at anyone, unless you intend to use it.” I sounded like Dad in one of his daily lectures. I threw the gun and single bullet at Paul’s feet, before turning to Charlie. “You okay?” 

 “Yes…” He nodded. 

Paul stood, wiping dirt from his jeans. “You’re right, Tommy, I shouldn’t point a gun unless I’m willing to use it. Well, I’ll be pointing it at Armstrong’s head, once I get a plan set up.” 

 

 It took Paul three days to come up with a plan. It was late when we sat on a small collection of rocks deep inside Blackwood. 

“Every Thursday night after the movie house shuts, Arm strong takes porn movies home to watch in that run-down trailer of his,” said Paul.  

“How do you know?” asked Charlie. 

“Everyone knows,” said Paul, his voice rising slightly. 

From the look on Charlie’s face, he obviously wasn’t everyone. I guess I wasn’t everyone either, because I had the same look. 

"You’re gonna be the bait, Charlie,” said Paul. 

“Bait?” Charlie frowned. 

“Something to lure the perv to where we can get him off-guard.” 

 “Why me?” 

“Would you rather pull the trigger?” 

 “No…” 

Almost immediately I realised I had underestimated Paul’s conviction to this plan. 

“We’ll meet back here tomorrow night,” continued Paul. “And remember: this is for Joey.” 

 

 Armstrong’s trailer was a rust bucket, parked just outside town. In the iron darkness, a faint light filtered from the trailer’s back window. 

For the last hour, we did a stakeout, just across from the trailer. As Paul predicted, Armstrong was home. 

“You ready, Charlie?” asked Paul. 

“Yes…” 

“Know what to do?” Charlie nodded. 

“Tap on his door, ask for directions. Tell him I’m lost and thirsty.” 

“It’s important you say you’re thirsty. Understand?” 

“Yes.” 

 I kept wondering when Paul was going to chicken out, believing his game-plan had to be relying on Charlie or me backing out first. That way, he would save face and still be king of the castle.  

“We’re gonna have to crawl from here, so he doesn’t spot us,” whispered Paul, dropping on his belly. “Come on.” 

Getting down, we crawled behind him like characters from an old war movie. A minute later, we reached the back of the trailer, and stood. Dull sounds were coming from inside. 

Paul edged his face against the back window. “The perv’s watching a porno. Check it out, Tommy.” 

Easing my face partially against the window, I focused with one eye. It was dark inside, but the luminous light from the television helped. Armstrong was sitting on a battered armchair, bottle of beer in one hand, remote control in the other. He seemed engrossed on whatever was on the television. 

“Okay, Charlie. Make a move for the door,” said Paul. 

“You… you won’t let him kill me, will you, Paul?” 

“Don’t be stupid. He’s the one who’s gonna be killed. Now move!” 

Slowly, Charlie edged his body along the front of the trailer. Even in the dull moonlight, I could see the terror on his face. 

What seemed like an eternity passed before Charlie began rapping timidly on the door. 

I quickly glanced in at Armstrong. He hit a button on the remote, muting the television. Charlie rapped again. 

The door opened, bleaching Charlie in light. 

“Yes?” said Armstrong. 

 “I’m… I’m lost, Mister,” said Charlie. “Could… could you give me some directions on how to get home… please?” 

“Where the hell’s home, boy?” 

“Fair… Fairbanks. I live in Fairbanks,” lied Charlie. 

“Fairbanks? You’re a long way out. What’re you doing in this neck of the woods?” 

I could detect suspicion in Armstrong’s voice. 

 “I… I was with a couple of friends, camping in Blackwood, but we split up after a stupid argument,” replied Charlie. 

“Camping’s illegal in Blackwood.”

 “You… you’re not going to call the cops, are you?” 

“No, so relax. Come in. You look hungry. You hugry, boy?” 

“And thirsty…” 

Everything went dark as the trailer door slammed. 

“What now?” I asked. 

 “We wait until Armstrong comes to the back of the trailer. That’s where he keeps his cola.” 

Paul eased his face along the window, eyeing the scene from a corner. I took the other corner. 

I could see Charlie standing at the doorway. Arm strong was talking. Charlie looked petrified. 

 Suddenly, Armstrong turned, and looked directly at us. Paul and I ducked down immediately. Above, I could hear movement approaching, then the sound of a cupboard opening. 

Paul eased his head back up, and peeped into the window. I followed suit and saw Armstrong taking a bottle of cola from an overhead cupboard. He eased the cap from the bottle. 

A few seconds later, Armstrong poured the cola into a glass, then, using the opened cupboard door as a shield, he began adding a touch of clear liquid from a small con tainer into the glass. 

“What the hell’s he doing?” I looked at Paul. He was gripping the Luger so tightly, his knuckles looked like they were ready to pop. I watched in horror as he brought the muzzle of the gun to the window, hands trembling terribly. 

He’s really going to shoot, I thought, watching him take shaky aim. 

Without warning, Armstrong eased his face towards the window. I was certain he had spotted us. I froze. Armstrong continued staring. It wasn’t until later I realised he wasn’t looking at us, but Charlie’s mirrored image on the window. 

Turning, Armstrong headed back down the trailer to Charlie. 

“Paul? We can’t let him do this to Charlie,” I pleaded. 

But Paul didn’t respond. He simply stood there, like an android, pointing the gun at the window. It was then I noticed the enormous dark patch in Paul’s washed-out jeans. He had pissed himself. 

“Paul!” I screamed, not caring if Armstrong could hear us. “Snap out of it!” 

“I… I… I…” His lips were barely moving. 

“Shit!” I screamed, running towards the front of the trailer before kicking in the door. 

Charlie looked relieved; Armstrong looked shocked. 

“Run, Charlie!” 

Outside, we ran quickly to the end of the trailer to get Paul, but he was already running in the opposite direction, towards Blackwood forest. 

It was the last time I would ever see him… 

 

Next day, I waited nervously as Dad returned home from night duty. I sat, pretending to read my comics. “Not out enjoying the sun?” he asked. 

“I want to finish this.” I held up the copy of Batman. 

So far so good. No mention of Armstrong. 

“Are you still running about with that Fleming kid?” 

My stomach suddenly did a little kick. Had he heard something, after all? Dad was very good at trapping people – just ask any of the criminals he had interrogated over the years before jailing them. 

 “I… won’t be with him, anymore, Dad. That’s a promise.” 

He gave me one of his ten-second stares before replying. 

“Make sure you keep that promise. Now, get out into the fresh air.”

I nodded, and headed for the door, grateful that the whole sorry Armstrong-episode was over with. 

By the time I reached the lake, the sun was baking down on me. The place was deserted, and the cool calm water looked totally inviting. Despite warnings from Dad to stay out of the water, I couldn’t resist. It still had that magnetic pull on me. Moreover, to overcome Joey’s death, I knew I had to conquer the water first. It was the only way to stop the nightmares I was having of Joey’s face, his skin being peeled and devoured by tiny fish. 

Stripping, I began piling my clothes against some rocks, when suddenly I thought I spotted someone staring at me from the trees’ shadows, deep beyond the lake’s fringe. 

“Paul? Is that you?” 

Nothing. 

“Who’s there?” 

I thought of Joey’s ghost. 

To hell with it. I ran naked towards the water’s coolness, diving into its murky underworld. It was exhilarating, and I went deeper, testing lungs, resolve and nerve. 

I seemed to have been swimming for hours when my head finally broke through the water’s ceiling. Breathing deeply, I let a yell of joy scream from my mouth. “I’m alive!” 

But the euphoria quickly dissipated when I heard something enter the water directly behind me. 

To my dismay, it was a girl, her dark hair crapped-in like a pageboy. Her face was a constellation of freckles. Like me, she was totally naked. Unlike me, she was beautiful. 

I felt my face burn. Had she seen me naked? 

“What’s your name?” she asked, nonchalantly, as if  seeing a naked boy was the norm. 

 I couldn’t speak. The sight of her nipples, poking above the water line, hypnotised me. It was the first time I had ever seen a naked girl. It was thrilling and terrifying. 

“Are you deaf?” she said. “What’s your name?” 

“Tommy,” I finally managed to mumble, trying desper ately to look away from her breasts, but failing miserably. 

A smile appeared on her face. “I’ve seen you a couple of times, swimming here with your friends.” 

“You watched us, swimming…?” Nude, I wanted to say, but didn’t. 

“Out of sheer boredom, so don’t get the wrong idea.” 

The smile widened, making her even more beautiful. “Are you the one who discovered the dead kid?” 

I nodded. “Joey… his name was Joey Maxwell.” 

“You must be very brave.” 

“I don’t know,” I said, shrugging my shoulders. 

“I wish someone would do that for me.” 

“I would,” I said, the two words sounding as if I had known her all my life. 

She laughed loudly, but I detected sadness in the sound. 

Suddenly, she disappeared underwater only to reap pear seconds later beside me. Before I knew what was happening, she was kissing me full on the mouth. I could taste her breath, the saltiness of her tongue, the pressure of her breasts against my chest. 

I gasped as I felt her hands began fondling my balls under the water, as if weighing them. I couldn’t breathe. Her fingers moved across the shaft of my cock. I jerked back, as if being prodded by electricity. 

“What’s wrong? Haven’t you been with a girl before?” 

“Of course,” I lied, feeling my face burn with embarrassment. “Lots.”  

She laughed. “I’ve got to go.” 

“Now? But…” 

“Yes. Now.” 

“But…” 

She began swimming towards where our clothes lay in a heap. I watched her easing out of the water, small buttocks seesawing mischievously. 

“Aren’t you coming, Tommy?” 

I couldn’t. Too terrified she would see my penis, all stiff and angry. “I… no, I’m going to swim for a while.” 

“Okay.”

 I watched her putting on her clothing, preparing to leave. 

“What’s your name!” I shouted. 

“Dakota.” 

“Will you be here, tomorrow?” 

“Perhaps.” 

That night, I enjoyed the first good sleep since Joey’s death. Instead of nightmares of him, I dreamt of a mysterious girl called Dakota, wondering when – if – I would see her again. 

 

Next day I ran as fast as I could towards Jackson’s Lake. Arriving at the exact spot from yesterday. I sat waiting. But my initial burst of euphoria quickly turned to despon dency. She wasn’t coming. Not now. Probably not ever. I’d been a fool to think someone so beautiful would have an interest in someone as plain and boring as me. 

Four hours later, I eventually returned home, defeated. 

For days I moped about the house until finally threat ened by Dad. 

“If you don’t get out and go someplace, I’ll be forced to bring you over to the jail to clean toilets.”  

Taking the hint, I left, walking in the direction of the lake, almost in a trance, hardly hearing Charlie behind me. 

“Going for a swim, Tommy?” 

“No. Just walking and killing time. What’s happening?” 

“Nothing much.” Charlie looked embarrassed, as if he had been avoiding me. It seemed we were all involved in a conspiracy of avoidance. 

“Seen Paul about?” I asked. 

“Yesterday, for a few minutes. We didn’t speak much. He…” Charlie peered over his shoulder. “He mentioned Not Normal.” 

“Yeah?” 

“Said that one day… he’d make him pay.” 

 “Keep well away from Paul.” 

“You’re right.” Charlie nodded. “Sure you don’t want to go for a swim?” 

“Not today. I’ve things to do.” 

 “Me, too.” Charlie looked relieved. “Well, call me when you want.” “Sure.” 

At the lake, I could do nothing but stare at the water. 

“You weren’t here yesterday,” said a voice behind me. I turned quickly to see Dakota smiling at me, and suddenly my world was okay again. 

“I was here a couple of days ago. I couldn’t find you.” 

“Can’t find what doesn’t want to be found,” she re plied, cryptically. “Anyway, we’re both here now. Going for a swim?” 

Before I could answer, she was stripping, her beautiful naked body emerging from the cocoon-like clothing. 

“Stop gawking and strip!” she commanded. “C’mon!” 

Away she went, running for the water, leaving me fumbling at my clothing. 

In the water, she splashed while dunking me twice, laugh ing, throwing her head back with joy. She suddenly seemed like a kid, not the sophisticated woman I had imagined. 

“Isn’t this fun, Tommy?” Her eyes were smiling. 

“Yes!” I shouted from the top of my voice. 

 I wanted this moment to last forever. I no longer cared about family or friends, life or any of those silly things. 

After an hour of swimming about, she said, “Come on.” 

“You’re going?” I was shattered. 

“I’ve things to do.” She began swimming towards land. “Hurry up and get out.” 

I quickly followed, feeling anger and disappointment boiling in me. 

On dry land she scooped up her clothes, but didn’t put them on. 

“This way. Hurry,” she said, smiling, running. 

Quickly grabbing my clothes, I followed her into the wild and camouflaging grass, noticing for the first time the constellation of miniature horseshoe-shaped bruises on her buttocks. The marks were frightening to look at, but I couldn’t take my eyes from them. It wasn’t the first time I had seen marks like that. Without warning, she pulled me down onto the grass, quickly rolling on top of me. 

“Squeeze,” she whispered, placing my hand on her left breast. 

Hesitantly, I squeezed. Her breast was warm and small, like an egg after a hen goes to feed. 

“Do you love me, Tommy?” 

“Y… yes.” 

“Say you love me.” 

“I… I love you,” I managed to say, throat sandpaper dry. Rolling off, she lay on her back, fully exposed. 

“One day, when I think you’re ready, I’ll let you go further than just touching my boobs.” 

“Further?” My voice was a croak. 

“Yes, but things like that have to be earned. Do you understand?” 

“Yes… but—” 

“Shhhhhhhh!” She suddenly placed a finger firmly to my lips. Her eyes filled with terror. “Someone’s here, watching” 

The sweaty proximity of fear touched me for a second, making the hairs on the back of my neck tighten. I stopped breathing. Listening intently, I thought of Charlie. Had he followed me? Worse. Paul? 

We lay there motionless for minutes, when suddenly there was heavy movement behind me. I wanted to get up and run, but without warning a hare burst through the long blades of grass, scampering over our naked bodies, scaring the shit clean out of me. 

Dakota burst out laughing. “Oh, Tommy! Your face!” 

“Don’t you talk! You were terrified.” 

Suddenly, she stood up and started dressing. 

“Why’re you going, Dakota? Angry at me poking fun at you?” 

“Don’t be silly.” She kissed me on the lips. “I’ve got to go. My mum needs looking after. I can only get out for a couple of hours each day.” 

 “Oh… I’m sorry.” Suddenly I was filled with remorse, and embarrassed by my selfishness. 

“It’s okay. I’ve been looking after her for years.” 

“Don’t… don’t you have a dad?” I asked, regretting it the moment my big mouth opened. 

“He… died… a long time ago.” 

“I’m sorry.” 

“Don’t keep saying sorry.” Her voice suddenly had an edge. “It’s not a word I like. It’s weak.” 

 “Can I ask you something?” 

“What?” 

“Promise you won’t get mad.” 

“I don’t believe in promises. They’re always broken.” 

“Those… those marks, on your… butt…” 

“Yes? What about them?” Her face was impassive, but her voice sounded cautious. 

“What… what are they? They look like burn marks.” 

“If that’s what they look like, then let them be just that,” she said, pulling on her jeans, zipping them so loudly they sounded like a knife cutting into bone. “Are you finished questioning me?” “Yes…” I replied sheepishly. 

“Good.” She made a movement to go. 

“Can I walk you home?” 

“No.” 

I felt my throat tightening. The thought of her leaving was killing me. “When will I see you again?” 

“When I decide. Okay?” 

No, it wasn’t okay. “Okay.” 

I stood watching her leave, thinking of those horrible marks. It would be much later before I’d discover their true meaning. 

 

Over the following days, I got up early, running to the lake. Each time she didn’t appear, misery wormed further into me. 

I would never forget that early morning in bed, hearing Dad’s voice filtering into my room. He was talking with Mum, but secretively, in hushed tones. Sneaking out of my room, I hid on the landing, listening. 

“Dreadful…” Mum kept repeating. “And you’ve no idea who the young girl is?” 

“Nothing yet. I’ve seen some terrible killings, Maura, but this was one of the most violent. She’d been raped, also, poor thing.” 

“Dear God…” From the stairway, I could see Mum’s face cringe. Despite hearing the horrors of Dad’s job every day, she had never managed to immunize her feelings. “People will be expecting you to catch this monster – and quickly.” 

Dad looked annoyed at Mum. “I’ve never rushed an investigation, just to calm people’s fears. That’s how mistakes are made. I won’t be changing my ways just because of pressure.” 

“Of course not. I wouldn’t expect you—” 

Suddenly, they both looked up in my direction. 

“Tommy? What the hell are you doing?” said Dad. He looked startled. “Were you listening in?” 

“The girl, Dad? What… what did she look like?” I was slowly walking down the stairs. 

“You shouldn’t be listening—” 

“What did she look like!” 

“Tommy! Don’t you dare shout at your father!” 

Dad reached and touched Mum’s hand. “It’s okay, Maura. Sometimes it’s good to shout.” He was looking at me entirely different to the way Mum was. The cop in him was quickly kicking in. “Sit down and have breakfast, Tommy.” 

“I don’t want breakfast. What… what did she look like?” 

“She had dark hair, crapped page-boy style. Blue eyes. Her face was covered in—”

 “Freckles.” 

 Dad’s face turned sombre. “Did you know this young girl, Son?”  

“Her name’s Dakota.” I spoke of her in the present tense. 

“Dakota? What’s her second name?” 

I couldn’t answer. My voice was quivering, threaten ing to quit. Suddenly, tears were running down my face. Everything was spinning. 

“It’s okay, Son. It’s okay,” said Dad, leaving the table, edging towards me. 

Of course it would never be okay. Not now. Not ever. And when I collapsed in front of him, that was the first blackout I had ever experienced. More would follow, all the way to adulthood. 

That night, the nightmares started all over again. Only this time, Joey was joined by Dakota. 

 

Over the next few days, details of Dakota’s horrific murder and equally horrific life began to emerge. Her father abandoned her at the age of two, leaving her in the care of a mother hooked on drugs and alcohol. Margaret McKenzie – Dakota’s mother – earned money for the drugs through prostitution. It soon became known that Dakota had been abused by some of her mother’s clients. 

I wasn’t in the least bit surprised to hear that one of the clients had been Armstrong. My gut instinct had told me from the beginning that it had been Armstrong watching us in the long grass – not a frightened hare. It was little wonder Dakota had looked so terrified that day. 

Over the next few days, the local newspapers made Dakota’s brutal murder a cause célèbre, and relentless pressure was put on Dad to bring the perpetrator to justice… 

Despite this pressure, it was three long weeks before he was able to accumulate enough evidence to finally arrest Armstrong. Forensics had matched his teeth with the marks on Dakota’s buttocks. I shuddered when I overheard this piece of vile information. 

It was only then, for me, that all the parts of the puzzle began falling into place. I had noticed the almost identical marks on Paul’s buttocks, months ago as we skinny dipped. When he caught me looking, he became angry, accusing me of being a ‘homo’. We didn’t speak to each other for almost a week, until he eventually calmed down, and we were able to laugh about it. His explanation for the marks was a raid on Mister Johnson apple trees, and a weak branch. 

Lucky I landed on my ass rather than my head. I thought of his explanation and how feasible it sounded then. Not now. 

I believed Paul had been lured to Armstrong’s trailer with the incentive of money – something Paul was always short of. That was how Paul knew all about Armstrong’s comings and goings at the trailer – knew of the liquid in the cupboard, which I suspected had some sort of drug in it. That’s why Paul insisted Charlie say he was thirsty, knowing Armstrong would go to the cupboard at the end of the trailer, and where Paul waited in the darkness to shoot. I shuddered at the thought of what happened to Paul, and now fully understood why he wanted to kill such an evil creature. It all made sense. Paul. Joey. Dakota. How many others? 

As the weeks went by, Armstrong at first denied knowing Dakota, but finally admitted having what he called paid ‘consensual’ sex. The bite marks were part of the sexual act he enjoyed. She was sixteen, and there was no law against having sex with a consenting adult. Dad suspected the abuse of Dakota by Armstrong had started many years ago, but suspecting and proving were two different matters entirely. 

After being held in the county jail for three months, Armstrong was eventually released through lack of substantial evidence. 

 As days turned to weeks, Dakota’s murder slipped down the list of priorities. The economy was in turmoil and people had more pressing things to think about such as jobs and livelihoods. 

It was late December, when the town learned the news of Armstrong’s body being found at his trailer. He had been shot, once in the head. I’ll never forget the look of relief on Dad’s face, when he told Mum the news. 

“I only hoped he suffered,” said Mum. 

The newspapers held the same sentiments as Mum, but displayed them in a more professional manner, stating that sometimes justice takes a while, but once that while has come, it sure as hell takes. Someone said Christmas had come early for the town. 

Three days after Armstrong’s death I ran into Charlie. 

“He did it, Tommy. Paul went and shot the perv. He really did it.” Charlie looked terrified as well as excited. 

“Don’t talk about it. Understand? No one knows any thing. If word gets out, he’ll be arrested. You wouldn’t want that, would you?” 

“No… of course not. We… we’re blood brothers, aren’t we?” 

“Forever, Charlie.” “Are… are you going to talk to Paul?” 

“No. Best that we aren’t seen together.” 

 “Of course! I get it. They might be watching. Right?” 

I nodded. “Best play it safe.” 

Charlie nodded, also, and then hit me with his news. “I’m leaving here, Tommy. Dad got a promotion. We’re moving to Hastings.”  

Before I met Dakota, Charlie’s news would have dev astated me. But I had changed.

“That’s great, Charlie.” 

“I’ll probably come back, every now and again.” 

He was lying, of course. He had no intention of ever coming back. He was glad to be out of here, away from Paul, away from this town of monsters and bogeymen. 

We shook hands, and I watched him walk away. 

 

 “Tom? Are you sure you’re okay?” Belinda’s voice brought me back from the abyss. “Yes… really, love. I’m fine. Just need some fresh air. I’ll be back in a minute.” 

I went out to the garden, taking the newspaper with me. A cool breeze swept through me, and I stood in it, feeling every pore of my hot body cooling down. The breeze immediately reminded me of the evening I dumped Paul’s gun in the lake. When I went back to where he had hid it, I expected it to have been gone. But no, it was still there, in all its horrible glory, waiting for me. 

When I went to Armstrong’s trailer, I had no plan, only determination. That smile on his face was there, permanently etched like a guilty clown. When I shot him, he crumbled like a pile of dirty clothes. 

I walked back to the lake, and threw the gun as far as I could, hoping it would rest where Joey’s body had once been. Over the next few days, I waited to be arrested, but there was little interest shown by Dad or any of his colleagues. 

Armstrong had so many enemies, it would have been impossible to even know where to begin, he told Mum. Besides, the town is saying Armstrong got what he deserved, and they don’t want valuable resources being used up to find his killer or killers. Everyone is relieved. 

Now, re-reading the newspaper article, I wondered how many would still be relieved?

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About the author  

Sam Millar is a best-selling crime writer and playwright from Belfast, Northern Ireland, UK. He has won numerous literary awards and his books have all been critically praised. He is the recipient of the Aisling Award for Art and Culture, the Martin Healy Short Story Award, the Brian Moore Award for Short Stories and Cork Literary Review Writer’s Competition. He has also had his work performed by the BBC, and published in over thirty literary journals throughout the world, including the USA, Australia, Europe and Africa. Sam’s work has appeared in best-selling anthologies, and he has written a number of crime novels. To find out more visit his website: www.millarcrime.com .